tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5449558862188806699.post4337555278651289160..comments2011-08-04T21:58:21.310-06:00Comments on your not-so-average ray of sunshine: Argh matey! It be the Bickerin' Blogfest post.AshleyTenillehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10151369625752568973noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5449558862188806699.post-1517581732141231152010-07-06T11:16:14.546-06:002010-07-06T11:16:14.546-06:00Aww thanks everyone, you guys sure know how to mak...Aww thanks everyone, you guys sure know how to make a girl smile.<br />Thanks for all of the kind words, and yes I agree with the trimming needed to be done, this one is pre-revisions/editing. <br /><br /><3AshleyTenillehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10151369625752568973noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5449558862188806699.post-68050784570285479972010-06-30T18:29:47.219-06:002010-06-30T18:29:47.219-06:00This is a great scene! Enjoyed the argument and es...This is a great scene! Enjoyed the argument and esp liked the last line as well. Nicely done!Taleihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07317577935549931974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5449558862188806699.post-85843397381113180872010-06-30T13:23:33.300-06:002010-06-30T13:23:33.300-06:00Very good scene! The only thing that was weird to ...Very good scene! The only thing that was weird to me is that my daughter is names Lexi... and she's just as much of a firecracker as your Lexi (only on a toddler level LOL). Thank you so much for participating!Kristenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13726586763569629811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5449558862188806699.post-86849393818031118482010-06-30T11:35:05.955-06:002010-06-30T11:35:05.955-06:00Could use a teeny bit of trimming here and there b...Could use a teeny bit of trimming here and there but good scene. They both clearly have their own agendas and their own perspectives on the situation. Makes me wonder how Reid feels about the whole thing.Valeriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14148970927473800732noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5449558862188806699.post-53574657723030464002010-06-30T09:25:10.596-06:002010-06-30T09:25:10.596-06:00wow. lots of conflict. nice last line.wow. lots of conflict. nice last line.Michelle Gregoryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05747275507200268417noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5449558862188806699.post-68154617231846442242010-06-30T08:23:00.728-06:002010-06-30T08:23:00.728-06:00WHOAZ. Loved the arguing and fight, f-bombs and al...WHOAZ. Loved the arguing and fight, f-bombs and all. She's not argumentative, just passionate, and uses passionate language. ;)Tiffany Nealhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13843374938222817346noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5449558862188806699.post-86922965753812654642010-06-30T04:47:19.687-06:002010-06-30T04:47:19.687-06:00I like the actual arguing. I think that's very...I like the actual arguing. I think that's very tight. The fight is good too. Possibly, the start just needs one or two of the stacked adjectives and adverbs taking out, but other than that, good.stuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16388674850920848503noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5449558862188806699.post-70379313915543092932010-06-30T01:17:29.550-06:002010-06-30T01:17:29.550-06:00Rowl! Very good. Its hard to stay in one POV in ...Rowl! Very good. Its hard to stay in one POV in such a fracas, but you did well. And never lost your surrounding either.<br /><br />Very intense and satisfying.<br /><br />Thanks for sharing.<br /><br />.......dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.com